Rachel - Peer Evaluation

Positive feedback:
• Good match on action
• Music fit in well/ was appropriate
• Sense of suspense created by not revealing faces
• Shot/ reverse shot worked well
• Nice framing
• Sense of tension
• Good pace

Points to work on:
• Could have been more lighting in last shots
• Check what is in the background
• Match on action could have been better

I think that to improve our final piece we could have made it more convincing with use of costume (a darker, more serious sort of costume for both characters would have been more appropriate) and we could have edited some parts more precisely such as the part where the door closes behind Amy – it might have been more effective at the end of the tilt upwards rather than in the middle. I also have learned that we will need to use lighting in some shots to make the images more defined and that we need to remember to ensure that there are no unwanted props in the background that might create a distraction from the subject.